Prey (a short comic submission)

As some of you know, I haven't updated Lovarian Adventures for the past 2 weeks and possibly for one more week. And the reason being I'm currently doing a rush job at finishing an 8-page short comic for submission to an Australian literary magazine that accepts comics.

With the deadline officially on October 2 (Monday), I still have to finish it way before then because I have to give it time for my mailed submission to get to their office (maybe 2 days). So, I have to finish by Wednesday to be able to mail the thing on Thursday. I can maybe still finish it on Thursday instead and mail it on Friday but I have to pay more to get it delivered to the publisher by Monday.

Anyway, I've started cranking out pages Friday night and I've posted the first four pages of it in the forum. Note that there are no dialogue balloons or the Painter shading that will be added later. My priority right now is to finish the pencilled pages (I won't ink any of it). When there's time, I'll add the Painter shading. And again, if there's still time, I'll add dialogue balloons.

The original intent was that there wouldn't be any dialogue. But while drawing the pages, I was thinking of adding a few in there. So, if there's still time and I feel like doing it, yeah, I'd add some dialogue.

So, without the dialogue, is it obvious what's going on in these pages?